各位想學習英文的朋友們 有個問題想請教大傢 我是剛開始學習英文的人 麻煩大傢看一下我的句子有沒有寫錯 - 趣味新聞網

1.She took a few capsules because she had a headache.

2.He likes to drink syrup.

3.where are the cold powder?

4.They are the pills from prescription.

5.New year is breva new world. （breva 是什么啊。。。）

6.He is so jealous when he lost loveless. （不知道你想说什么。。。）

7.Have you ever drank wine.

8. which restaurant is famous for spagheitt and sausage ?

9.Taiwan is proud of fruits.

10.I will be grown and prepared for the hard future.

11.I went to the Zoo as I wanted to see lizards and insects. （你去zoo看崑虫？呵呵）

12.You are a large enemy of yourself.

13. If you have not done anything wrong, you don't need to be afraid of ghosts.

希望对你有帮助
加油
～

自己写的~~先给你拍拍手
Keep on the hard work!

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1.She took a few capsule because she felt headache.
复数capsule + S,
Headache 用 have 过去式用 had

2.He like to drink syrup.
弟三人称单数加S

3.where are cold powder?
要加冠词或定冠词 THE cold powder

4.They are pill by prescription.
FROM prescription
复数 pill + S

5.New year is breva new world.
看不懂

6.He is so jealous when he lost loveless.
还是看不懂你要说什么

7.Have you ever drank wine.
Correct

8.where is famous for spagheitt and sausage the restanraut?
你是不是要写 The restaurant is fasmous for its spagheitt and sausage.
在哪里?  Where is the restaurant which is famous for its spagheitt and sausage?

9.Taiwan is proud of fruit.
这句话文法没错但语意怪怪的~  台湾不会对于他的水果感到骄傲, 台湾人会

10.I will grown and prepared to hard future.
grown, prepared 是形容词, 要加BE动词
prepared FOR THE hard future

11.I went to the Zoo as I want to saw lizards and insects.
want to SEE 不定词TO 后面动词用原形
你想要说什么?
I wanted to see lizards and insects when I went to the zoo.

12.You are large an enemy of yourself.
You are a large enemy of yourself.
You are the largest enemy of yourself.

13. If you doesn't wrongdoing, You doesn't be afraid of ghost.
you + DON'T 不会是DOESN'T
不晓得你要说什么

Hope I helped

JACK

[ 本帖最后由 JackUSA 于 2008-4-1 17:57 编辑 ]

感谢justjay & Jack 的回答，非常感恩！
我本来还以为不会有人理我，没想到那么快就有消息了！感动

第5题我打错了 ，应该是
5.New year is brave new world.
新的一年是美好的新世界

6.我是想说:「他很忌妒当他得不到爱时。」

8我想写的是那间以义大利面跟香长的餐厅在哪里
为什么famous for 后面要加上its呢？

11.我想说的是我去动物园，因为我想看昆虫跟蜥蜴
二位写的不太一样也，有一点搞不太清楚，二位的意思应该一样吧！？
ps.动物园是有昆虫馆的。

13.我想说的是不做亏心事，不怕鬼找你
为什么不能用wrongdoing呢？而且一定要加上need to吗？

thanks

5.New year is brave new world.
新的一年是美好的新世界

首先 应该是
new year is [a]  brave new world
其次 brave 我只知道有勇敢的意思，应该不能有美好的意思吧？
最后就是我连中文都看不懂
什么是 新的一年是美好的新世界 啊？
比较接近的应该是
this would be a great new year.

6.他很忌妒当他得不到爱时。
这句我也不是特别理解，得不到爱的时候他嫉妒什么呢？
不过繙译过来应该是
his jealousy ariese when he is loveless

8. 那个its 加不加没有太大区别
好比说  那间以义大利面跟香长而着名的餐厅在哪里 －－－》 那间以[他的]义大利面跟香长而着名的餐厅在哪里

11. 不一样的意思
I went to the Zoo as I wanted to see lizards and insects.
我去了zoo是因为我想要看lizards 和 insects
I wanted to see lizards and insects when I went to the zoo.
当我去zoo的时候我想要看lizards 和 insects

13.
可以用wrongdoing, 不过很少用 本身是noun
所以如果一定要用 应该是
if you dont have any wrongdoing,
不过这样句子很难听啊
need to 也不是一定要加
你可以说you wont be afraid of ghosts ---> 你不会害怕鬼
但是意思有一点不一样
you dont need to be afraid of ghosts ---> 你不需要害怕鬼
就这么点区别


加油学习～～～

喔！我懂了，很谢谢你的回答喔！
不过有 brave new world这个字也是片语，
我在yahoo有查到！意思如下：

ph. (片语 phrase)
美好新世界
They took it for granted that after the war a brave new world was to be ushered in.
他们理所当然地认为战后必将迎来一个美好的新世界。

另外"ariese"是什么意思呢？我查不到也！

你的程度还不错  已经可以写句子了
不错
多多练习一定会更进步的

arise和rise的意思基本相同
只是动词的形式不一样
rise是vt －－ 后面跟宾语
airse是vi－－后面不跟宾语
我语法不是一步步学的所以解释不清楚
不好意思
ps 谢谢你的brave new world 的解释

我懂了，谢谢justjay喔！

感谢pc20003210的鼓励，感动！

那下面的句子还请大家再帮我看一下，谢谢喔！

1.My Mother supply to me money.

2.He expects to vacation this week

3.He is negative that he sneaked money

4.Let me pour tea for you

5.The children likes cartoon.

6.You are sad live,why don't let happy from live instead

7.She is working attention.

8.He is a native musician

9.summer always sprinkle at afternoon

10.The bakery makes delicious cakes.

11.The occasion hold your hand,You can try it.

12.He work position is very casual.

13.woman revolve around her child and husbard.

14.Ther paper is in alphabetical order

15.He reached home before you leave.

16.Someting light float on water.

谢谢各位的仔细解说，让我离英文又近了一点点，谢谢喔！

1.My Mother supply to me money.
1. my mother supplies money to me.
语法不对，不过我解释不来不好意思
2.He expects to vacation this weeka
2.he expects to have a vacation this week.
vacation是名词,不能放在to的后面
3.He is negative that he sneaked money
不是非常确定你要说什么不过,sneak money?你想说逃避付款？  单语法应该没问题
4.Let me pour tea for you
语法没错
5.The children likes cartoon.
加了the就是特指了，如果你所指的是某些孩子就可以保留the
还有就是children是复数，复数后面的动词不加s -- the children like cartoon.
6.You are sad live,why don't let happy from live instead
语法不正确，如果硬要改应该是：
you are sad to live, why dont you live happily instead.
但是you are sad to live的意思是    你活得很失败
猜测你的意思，应该改成
why dont you let happiness to fill in your life (instead of being sad everyday).
一句句子比较好
7.She is working attention.
不知道你要具体说什么
8.He is a native musician
正确
9.summer always sprinkle at afternoon
单语法来说，应该是
summer always sprinkles in the afternoon.
10.The bakery makes delicious cakes.
正确
11.The occasion hold your hand,You can try it.
你想说什么？occasion用在这里不对
12.He work position is very casual.
单语法来说
His working position is very casual.
你是想说他的工作位置很休闲？
13.woman revolve around her child and husbard.
既然你是特指，那么woman前面要加the， revolve后面要加s
其他都对
14.Ther paper is in alphabetical order
正确
15.He reached home before you leave.
He reached home before you left
既然是过去式，那么后面那个也得是过去式
16.Someting light float on water.
不确定妳要说什么

有进步啊～～
加油。。。。

1.My Mother supply to me money.
弟三人称单数加S
你的语意怪怪的,应该说是用的字不对!
如果说你原意只是想表达你母亲给你钱:
My mother gave me some moey
如果说你想要表达你母亲提供经济上的帮助, 你应该用 finance 这个字
My mother provides me financial supports.

2.He expects to vacation this week
vacation 是名词, 不会接在不定辞to后面
vacation 习惯上用take
He expects to take vacation this week.

3.He is negative that he sneaked money
不知道你想表达什么.  "SNEAKED MONEY"  what is that?

4.Let me pour tea for you
倒茶?  不会用POUR这个字, 这是中文啦
Let me make some  tea for you.
Let me prepare the tea for you.

5.The children likes cartoon.
children 是复数名词,不用加S
This child likes cartoons.
Every child likes cartoons.
All children like cartoons.

6.You are sad live,why don't let happy from live instead
首先, 英文的基本句型 S(主辞) + V (动辞) + O(受辞)
你这句话基本结构不对
You always live sadly.  Why don't you let happiness takes over?

7.She is working attention.
不知道你想表达什么
如果你想要说他在努力的作某件事:
She is worling ON something.

8.He is a native musician
我想你要说的是"他是个天生的音乐家"
天生的~~不会native这个字
Existing in or belonging to one by nature; innate: native ability 与生据来的能力
Being such by birth or origin: a native American 美国原住民 (印地安人)
Natural; unaffected: native beauty 天生丽质

天生的音乐家...我暂时想不到有什么好字可以用,请大家提供
She is bron to be a musician.

9.summer always sprinkle at afternoon
It oftern sprinkles in summer afternoon
"s"
"IN the afternoon"
还有~~夏天不会下雨~~所以通常用IT代替天空
It is raining now

10.The bakery makes delicious cakes.
GOOD Job~~

11.The occasion hold your hand,You can try it.
不知道你想表达什么
"S"
"逗点" ~~句型错

12.He work position is very casual.
不知道你想表达什么
He works .....
His position is ......

13.woman revolve around her child and husbard.
特定女人,用SHE就可以
泛指女性,用 Women .....  THEIR    单复数要一致

14.Ther paper is in alphabetical order
THE paper.....
Their paper.....
不知道你想表达什么, 用单数好像怪怪的
The papers are in alphabetical order. 这些论文是按照字母顺序排的

15.He reached home before you leave.
到家很少用reach,
He got home before you left.
语意还是怪~~他在你离开前回到家???  (你会不知道??)

16.Someting light float on water.
不知道你想表达什么
There is something light floating on the water.

Hope it helps.

JACK

[ 本帖最后由 JackUSA 于 2008-4-14 16:35 编辑 ]

3.他否认他有偷钱
不知道如果我改成(下面)会不会比较好一点
He snedaked money bou he negative.

6.我的意就是
You always live sadly.  Why don't you let happiness takes over?

只是不能用instead吗？

7.她很专心的工作
She is working full attention(这样有没有好一点)

9.夏天不是梅雨季，常会有午后雷雨

11.机会掌握在手中，你该试看看
You should get hold of occasion,you can try.

13.我是泛指女性，那我their要放哪押？

14.我要说的就是The papers are in alphabetical order.
jack太强了，现在都猜的到我要说什么，哈哈...


谢谢justjay & jack的耐心回答喔！感恩！

我发现你对词性不是很了解
名词,动词,形容词,和复词用的地方都不一样, 有机会有能力多用英英字典
Negative是形容词,不会单独接在HE后面,起码要加个BE动词
再者, 否认不会用Negative这个字
DENY比较合适
另外, SNEAK是偷偷摸摸, 偷熘, 偷跑 的意思
偷钱用steal就可以了

He denied stealing the money.



Why don't you live a happy life instead of a sad one?



习惯上会用ALL AFTERNOON 或 whole afternoon 而不是 full afternoon
再, 你写的句子并没有表达出"专心" 而只是 "他整个下午都在工作"

She is working hard all afternoon.



雷阵雨用 Thundershower



The opportunity is in your hand and you should give it a try.



...their child and husbard.



嘿嘿~~你犯的错都是一般常见的错误, 所以比较好猜  
加油~~

JACK

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