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2022年3月26日

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城市建設之住房問題

大作文題目

The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences, and only government action can solve the problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

寫作思路

本題是道經典的討論如何解決城市住房危機的議論文。盡管有限定詞only，文章肯定瞭政府的作用，並從不同方麵給齣瞭具體的解決方案。解決方案一是針對低到中等收入租房者政府應該資助保障性住房；解決方案二是為瞭讓大多數傢庭有能力購房，政府應限製土地投機，以及對房地産投資收益徵稅。本題的寫作關鍵是切忌僅僅錶麵談論政府的職責，缺少具體的解決方案文章則會假大空。此外，讓步段我們抓住瞭城市住房問題另一重要的討論角度，提齣瞭人們可以選擇居住在rural areas從而應對住房短缺，但最終仍明確論證齣這依然取決於政府的努力。可能有的同學會從其他角度來討論問題的解決，大傢可以嘗試寫不同的思路，文章之所以會肯定政府的角色是因為其作用是最根本的。

重點詞匯與語料

the unavailability of ......的不可用

in congestedmetropolises在擁擠的大都市

unprecedented repercussions 前所未有的影響

ongoing discussion正在進行的爭論

radical solutions根本的解決方案

housing crisis住房危機

hinge on取決於

center around supply圍繞供應

affordable housing 經濟適用房，保障性住房

attain獲取

low-to-medium income renters 低到中等收入租房者

key solution 關鍵的解決方案

subsidize資助

public housing公共住房

eligible 符閤條件的

affordableaccommodation負擔得起的住宿

address解決

attention to demand 關注需求

market-rate housing 市場利率的住房

nation’s aggregate income 國傢總收入

upper-income households 高收入傢庭

a larger share of real estate更大份額的房地産

limit land speculation限製土地投機

impose taxes on returns from real estate investments 對房地産投資收益徵稅

voice觀點

alternatives可供選擇的事物

urban housing 城市住房

settle the problem解決問題

housing scarcity住房短缺

count on依靠

strive for long-term results爭取長期成果

參考範文

The unavailability of living space in congested metropolises has led to unprecedented repercussions in many countries. While the issue is under ongoing discussion for decades, I do believe that radical solutions to the housing crisis mainly hinge on government policy.

The dialogue relating to the lack of housing often centers, as it should, around supply. Although housing is a basic human need, affordable housing is increasingly difficult to attain in big cities, especially for low-to-medium income renters. Therefore, the key solution, I think, should be to depend on the government to subsidize more public housing. By introducing and expanding public housing construction projects, more people who currently struggle to pay their rent would become eligible for affordable accommodation.

In addition to focusing on the problem of supply, the housing crisis will not be properly addressed without attention to demand. The primary reason why so many families cannot afford market-rate housing is that a greater share of the nation’s aggregate income goes to upper-income households, who can afford to own a larger share of real estate. Thus, there should be regulations in place that aim to limit land speculation, and higher taxes should be imposed on returns from real estate investments.

Nevertheless, there are voices that claim people suffering from housing problems can move to rural areas to lead a less stressful life. Indeed, less populated places tend to provide more options for residence. However, it relies on the government action to make rural areas attractive alternatives. It is conceivable that if more people were willing to live in rural areas, the demand for urban housing would decrease and rents and property prices would become more affordable.

In conclusion, to settle the problem of housing scarcity counts on government efforts to strive for long-term results.

注：杜斯迅老師原創參考範文，文中建議僅代錶老師立場，未經允許嚴禁一切商業用途。

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